In just a moment twisted time
deep set wound so scarcely stitchéd mine
wrenched open darkley runs as thine
heart fails to heed and starts to pine
for the maiden wooed the hearts combined

In just a moment twisted time deep set wound so scarcely stitchéd mine wrenched open darkley runs as thine heart fails to heed and starts to pine for the maiden wooed the hearts combined |
Devious Comments
First comment?
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-Dagonus
Beware the new American Gods; Safety and Efficiency. In their names we will be made slaves.
I'm sure glad I wasn't an abortion. How about you?
"Good timber does not grow with ease; the stronger the wind, the stronger the trees."
And it is a very good poem. :
The 4th line seems a little more "added just to be added" and doesn't quite feel the same as the others, but in light of what surrounds it, it still works
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God save me from my friends. I can protect myself from my enemies.
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-Dagonus
Beware the new American Gods; Safety and Efficiency. In their names we will be made slaves.
I'm sure glad I wasn't an abortion. How about you?
"Good timber does not grow with ease; the stronger the wind, the stronger the trees."
--
-Dagonus
Beware the new American Gods; Safety and Efficiency. In their names we will be made slaves.
I'm sure glad I wasn't an abortion. How about you?
"Good timber does not grow with ease; the stronger the wind, the stronger the trees."
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