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All Deviations

Said the Left to the Right by *Dagonus:iconDagonus:





"Love is an ocean."
You just might get lost in it.


I've drowned and drowned,
but cannot wait.

"Patience is the greatest of all virtues."
You could never afford.


I am hollow, empty,
lacking in the spirit.

"We are most alive when we're in love."
Don't forget you aren't dead.


I'm sure I've missed my chances.
I've never seen so much of my shoulder.

"Nothing is as far away as one minute ago."
The next minute is soon to be far away.


It's so hard to fight.
I've only strength to float.

"Never confuse movement with action."
Letting the ocean take you is inaction.


I can see love coming now.
I'm walking out her door.

"Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet."
Be careful of what tree you eat.


I've forgotten something, she says,
My kiss goodnight.
©2004-2008 *Dagonus
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Apparently I'm on a kick for 2 line stanzas these days.

So how many of you thought from the title that this was political.....uh...uh.... put your hands down.

I had two ideas in my head... but neither I thought was full enough... so i made and amalgam of the two. I think it works well. It also ended up having to do a lot with patience. I have very little patience often.

Know where the quotes are from? Get a i dunno.. something... maybe... if you ask nicely.

I think we all have conversations in our head in this fashion whether we realize it or not. The rational and the irrational. Whether we accept it or not is another matter all together.
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!Twilights-Child:iconTwilights-Child: Oct 21, 2004, 3:30:33 PM
It's really thought provoking and sounds like a chant because of it's two line stanzas. I really like this. =)
~Gaias-Spirit:iconGaias-Spirit: Oct 21, 2004, 3:38:35 PM
dude you should write a book... i'm favin this

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We are a pathetic race of socially suffocating know nothings who think there is somehow more to life than living.
~gemgurl:icongemgurl: Oct 21, 2004, 4:22:44 PM
I really like this.
*Dagonus:iconDagonus: Oct 21, 2004, 10:13:08 PM
But a book would require so many poems... and.... who would read it? or publish it? I wouldn't have teh foggiest on how to go about that anyhow.

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-Dagonus

Beware the new American Gods; Safety and Efficiency. In their names we will be made slaves.

I'm sure glad I wasn't an abortion. How about you?

"Good timber does not grow with ease; the stronger the wind, the stronger the trees."
*KagomeResurrected:iconKagomeResurrected: Oct 21, 2004, 10:32:36 PM
OHhh awesome...exactly...the brain is a weird thing :no:
but you've captured its....processes rather well :hug:

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Don't drink and derive.
~Gaias-Spirit:iconGaias-Spirit: Oct 22, 2004, 3:51:55 PM
>.> was just a thought, and plenty of people would read it, I dunno how ot go about anything else though

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We are a pathetic race of socially suffocating know nothings who think there is somehow more to life than living.
*Dagonus:iconDagonus: Oct 22, 2004, 3:55:16 PM
hmmm maybe... someday

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-Dagonus

Beware the new American Gods; Safety and Efficiency. In their names we will be made slaves.

I'm sure glad I wasn't an abortion. How about you?

"Good timber does not grow with ease; the stronger the wind, the stronger the trees."
*urnightmare:iconurnightmare: Oct 28, 2004, 4:18:05 PM
Nice I enjoyed reading this.
*Dagonus:iconDagonus: Oct 28, 2004, 11:10:47 PM
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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-Dagonus

Beware the new American Gods; Safety and Efficiency. In their names we will be made slaves.

I'm sure glad I wasn't an abortion. How about you?

"Good timber does not grow with ease; the stronger the wind, the stronger the trees."